Lewis, C. S. English Literature in the
Sixteenth Century, Excluding Drama.
Oxford: Clarendon Press, 1954. 526-535.
[C.S. Lewis on Daniel
and Drayton]
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Samuel Daniel 1 ( 1562-1619) has
already been considered as a sonneteer. It is shocking
to find that the same year ( 1592) which saw the production of his
admirable Delia saw also the production (in its first form--he
tinkered it a good deal afterwards) of his Complaint of Rosamond.
But we have learned to expect the worst from any descendant of the Mirror
for Magistrates, and Daniel
is here not even trying to achieve the sweetness and finish of his
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b. 1563?, near
Taunton.
Commoner, Magdalen Hall, Oxford, 1581. Trans. Paulus Jovius Imprese,
1585. Visits Italy. May have accompanied Lord Stafford's embassy to
France, 1586. After 1590 takes up residence at Wilton as tutor to W.
Herbert, son of the Earl of Pembroke. His tragedy Cleopatra,
1593. At Skipton, Yorkshire, as tutor to the Countess of Cumberland's
11-year-old daughter Anne, 1597, or 8? (As a tutor seems to have got on
well with his employers but to have disliked the work.) Under the new
reign is frequently at court. Receives office of 'allowing' all
entertainments played by the Children of the Revels to the Queen, 1603.
His Masque Twelve Goddesses played at court, 1604. His tragedy Philotas,
1604: supposed to have a seditious tendency: D. defends himself
successfully: his Queen's Arcadia (after Guarini). His Tethys
Festival played at Whitehall, 1610. His Hymen's Triumph played
before the queen, 1615. His (prose) Collection of History of England,
1617: becomes a groom of the Queen's Privy Chamber. In later life
rented a farm near Devizes. Ob. 1619. |
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sonnets. After the
historical
'tragedie' came me full-blown historical epic. The First Four Books
of his Civil wars between Lancaster and York
appeared in 1595, and this work rose by gradual additions to the
eight-book text of 1609. It belongs to the same (happily extinct)
species as Drayton Mortimeriados, a species separated by
its epic pretensions from the metrical chronicle of the Middle Ages,
but still catering for readers who are at least as much interested in
history as in poetry. Authorities are quoted and Daniel piques himself
on having added nothing to the facts except speeches--as Sallust and
Livy did in prose. He does not expect his work to be judged as 'pure'
literature. We must not therefore be surprised if it is often prosaic
(as in I. i-xxxvi) or if what would have been excellent prose (like I.
94-98) makes very tame verse. What is less pardonable is the clumsiness
with which some sentences are forced into the metre as in
And so become more popular
by
this;
Which he feares, too much he already is (I. 63).
Here, as often in Drayton, we
see
the need for critical standards. A
practised versifier like Daniel could have improved such a passage by
five minutes' work: he was content with it because his readers demanded
nothing better.
Yet he has carried
out his ill-chosen task better than Drayton. Both poets relieve their
narrative with reflections, but whereas Drayton's reflections are
usually gnomic platitude, Daniel's show real, and interesting, thought:
witness the passages on Order (II. 96), on the mixed causes of good and
evil (V. 38-39), on popular blame ( ibid. 65
), and on the substantial indifference, to the people, of the issues
for which they fought (VIII. 7). In the aetiological myth at the
beginning of Book VI he opens to us his whole mind about the age in
which he lived, and traces its miseries to the growth of great nation
states (28), the 'swelling sciences, the gifts of griefe' which have
'let in light That all may all things see, but what is right' (35),
religious controversy (36), printing (37), and gunpowder, whereby
'basest cowards from afar shall wound' (40). The latter complaint may,
but need not, owe something to Orlando Furioso, IX. 90. Such
passages, which illustrate a very important side of Daniel's literary
character, would be equally interesting in prose, but he has others of
more poetical appeal. He has expressed better than
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any poet I know what a man
feels
at the moment of his first big success: Bolingbroke, entering London in
triumph,
Admiring what hee thought
could
neuer be
Did feele his blood within salute his state (II. 64).
The river that 'glides on
with pomp
of waters unwithstood' (II. 7)
fully deserved the honour of being borrowed by Wordsworth. Henry VI's
words as he looks down on both armies before Towton, 'They must a
People bee When we shall not be kings' (VIII. 24) are memorable. No one
perhaps has said anything better about the great deeds of our ancestors
than 'The eternall euidence of what we were'. Best of all is the scene
(II. 68-71) in which Queen Isabel waits to see Richard entering London
and mistakes Bolingbroke for him. Here for a few stanzas the narrative
is worthy of Chaucer. And these beauties, though rarer than we could
wish, are never mere purple patches inorganically added to the story
(as the beauties in Drayton's epic sometimes are); they arise naturally
where the poet is kindled by his matter.
In 1599 came A Letter
sent
from Octavia to Marcus Antonius written to the formula of the Heroides.
It is more gracefully executed than the Rosamond.
Octavia says the things that a deserted wife of noble character (yet
not too noble--she can be sufficiently catlike about Cleopatra) might
be expected to say, but the verse does not carry passion enough to stir
us. Yet here, as often and henceforward increasingly in Daniel, the
thought holds our attention. Octavia disgresses in an interesting
[?print corrupt?]
on the exclusion of women from affairs;
We, in this prison of our
selues
confin'd
Must here shut vp with our owne passions liue
Turn'd in vpon us (18)
The matter of the poem is
better
than the manner. Daniel is never silly.
The long verse-colloquy Musophilus
belongs to the same year. Philocosmos attacks, and Musophilus defends,
the literary life, but it is not at all like a medieval conflictus
between Miles and Clericus.
Daniel is in earnest: the arguments of Philocosmos were those that
really troubled his own mind and his defence has nothing glib about it.
It is costly and difficult as though he were fighting for his life. He
knows that he is living in a great age in which 'Nature hath laid doune
at last That mighty birth
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wherewith so long she went'
(247).
Yet, like Pope in the Dunciad,
he sees the enemy ahead--Confusion 'that hath all in chace, To make of
all an vniuersal pray' (245). He realizes (and it is the vocational
disease of scholars to forget) how small a part literature, even at the
best, plays in human life; 'how many thousands never heard the name' of
Sidney or Spenser (440), how the real 'managing' of the world's affairs
requires arts unknown to literary men, so that often
While timorous knowledge
stands
considering
Audacious ignorance hath done the deede (490).
There are too many books
already.
Fame is at all times uncertain; and
what fame can be hoped by those who write in a 'barbarous language'
confined to a minute island? To this, as all know, Daniel makes at one
point the spirited reply that English may have a great future on
'strange shores' in the 'yet vnformed Occident' (955 et seq.). It is
well that he did not rest his whole case on that promise which history
has 'kept to the ear' and 'broken to the heart', for though Daniel is
read in America today, he is read there (as here) only by professional
scholars; not such an audience as poets dream. He is wiser, and more
appealing, when he faces squarely the possibility of almost total, or
total, failure. How if very few read books? 'That few is all the world'
(556), the world's heart which feels and knows only in a small
minority. But how, if none? Certainly (for Daniel is very honest) that
will cut off the author's 'comfort'; it cannot annihilate his love for
his art. He must continue to do the thing he feels himself born to do.
I am not at all sure that these thoughts have proved healthy to
literature. It may well be that the author who claims to write neither
for patron nor public but for himself has done our art incalculable
harm and bred up infinite charlatans by teaching us to emphasize the
public's duty of 'recognition' instead of the artist's duty to teach
and delight. Things may have been better when you could order your ode
from Pindar as you ordered your wine from the wine merchant. But that
does not alter the fact that in Musophilus we find a sort of
intellectual intimacy that hardly any English poet had offered us
before. There is no common measure between this and the formal,
external poetry about poetry which we find in Spenser and others. We
are with Daniel in his solitude, chewing the bitter questions which
come to all of our
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trade. In this poem every
reader
who is also a writer finds himself. It
has also many other merits, and beauties too numerous to quote. I allow
myself only this, on Stonehenge,
That huge dumbe heape that
cannot tell us how,
Nor what, nor whence it is (339).
Daniel's Senecan closet
dramas
hardly concern us. His lyrical gifts were small, though the Pastorall
'O happy golden Age', loosely translated from Guarini Pastor Fido
( IV. ix), combines with curious success wantonness of theme and
stateliness of movement; perhaps not the best thing in the world to do.
The Epistles ( 1603) carry us beyond our chronological boundary
and have been dealt with excellently by another hand. They claim to be
'after the manner of Horace', but of course the stanzaic form and the
loftiness of Daniel's mind preclude any real similarity. In them Daniel
is moving out of the Golden Age not in the 'Metaphysical' direction but
towards a greater severity and weight. That to Sir Thomas Egerton is an
essay (in prose it would have been a good one) on Equity as 'the soul
of law'. That to Lord Howard is even more prosaic. But that to the
Countess of Cumberland, a Christian-Stoical appropriation of the theme
suave mari magno, is almost a success. It is at any rate frequently
moving; and it is here that we catch Seneca's quam res est
contempta homo nisi supra humana surrexerit (Nat. Quaest. Prolog.)
on its way through Daniel to its predestined home in The Excursion
( IV. 330). 1
Though Daniel's poetry is
often
uninspired, sometimes obscure, and not
seldom simply bad, he has two strong claims on our respect. In the
first place, he can at times achieve the same masculine and unstrained
majesty which we find in Wordsworth's greater sonnets, and I believe
that Wordsworth learned it from Daniel. (The two poets had much in
common and Daniel would have liked Laodamia.) And secondly
Daniel is, in the nineteenth-century sense of the words, a poet of
ideas. There had of course been ideas in Chaucer, and Spenser: but I
think those poets felt themselves to be simply transmitting an
inherited and accepted wisdom. There are, again, plenty of ideas in
Donne, but they are, in my opinion, treated merely as the tools of his
peculiar rhetoric: he was not interested in their truth or falsehood.
But Daniel actually thinks in verse: thinks deeply, ar-
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Daniel exhibits
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metrical peculiarities which cannot be dealt with in the space at my
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duously, and perhaps with
some
originality. This is something quite
different from Dryden's power of neatly poetizing all the stock
arguments for the side on which he is briefed. Dryden states: Daniel
can doubt and wrestle. It is no necessary quality in a poet, and
Daniel's thinking is not always poetical But its result is that though
Daniel is not one of our greatest poets, he is the most interesting man
of letters whom that century produced in England.
Michael Drayton 1
( 1563-1631) is also a poet only half Golden, but in quite a different
way from Greville, Davies, and Daniel. They began with Gold and moved
away from it; he began with Drab, constantly relapsed into it, and in
his old age, when the Golden period was over, at last produced his
perfect Golden work, so pure and fine that no English poet has rivalled
it. His weakness is the very opposite of Daniel's; he was in a sense
too poetical to be a sound poet. His sensibility responded almost too
quickly to every kind of subject--myth, the heroic past, tragic story,
and (most of all) the fruitful, sheepdotted, river-veined,
legend-haunted expanse of England. He had an unquenchable desire to
write poetry about them all, and he always seemed to himself to be
succeeding because he mistook the heat which they aroused in him for a
heat he was communicating to the reader. He himself has told us (in the
Epistle To Henry Reynolds) how at the age of ten he
hugged
his
'mild tutor' begging to be made into a poet, and how the good man
granted his request, in typically sixteenth-century fashion, by
starting him on Mantuan. In that scene we have what is essential in
Drayton the man: a man with one aim, devoted for life to his art, like
Milton or Pope. If the Muse regarded merit he would have been one of
our greatest poets.
His career began
inauspiciously
with The Harmony of the Church
( 1591), drab scriptural paraphrases to which critics are too kind when
they accuse them of 'wooden regularity' for they are in reality wooden
without being regular. Idea, The Shepherd'sGarland
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b. 1563 at
Hartshill,
Warwickshire. Page in service of Henry Goodere,
1573. In service of Thomas Goodere, 1580. Returns to the service of
Henry Goodere, 1585. A friend of Stow and Camden. Connected with
Children of the King's Revels and the Whitefriars Playhouse, 1607. Said
to have had a meeting with Jonson and Shakespeare in 1616 at which the
latter is said to have drunk himself into a fever of which he is said
to have died. Mentioned by Edmund Bolton along with Chapman, Jonson,
Selden, and others as a founder of the proposed Royal Academy, c. 1617.
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Garland ( 1593) might be the
work
of a different man. These 'eglogs'
are much influenced by Spenser's pastoral poetry but wisely refrain
from his attempts at rustic realism. They were republished later with
so many alterations as to make them a new book. But even the 1593
version shows promise: the lyrics, as always in Drayton, are the best
part.
Idea's Mirror (
1594),
which I have already noticed, makes us think that Drayton is now going
on from strength to strength, but with Endimion and Phoebe
( 1595) there is another check. In this perplexing poem the style of
the erotic epyllion jostles with that of Du Bartas, and there is a
similar wavering in Drayton's conception of his theme. He has, rightly,
a feeling that this myth demands something more than a sensuous
treatment, but has not quite made up his mind what that something more
should be. I think he would like to have depicted the Platonic ascent
from carnal to intelligible love, but has really no idea of what one
would find at the top of the ladder. He has to fill up with astronomy
and the theory of numbers. When he re-wrote it eleven years later as The
Man in the Moon
the discrepancy remained and was aggravated by a syntax so contorted as
to be almost unreadable. In the earlier version the descriptive
passages often have the prettiness that was intended. The movement of
the couplets is a little monotonous.
His continual rewritings set
us a
problem. Detailed comparisons between
versions are impossible in a short account, and if these are abandoned
it becomes difficult to keep any kind of chronology. The 'Legends'
of Matilda, Pierce Gaveston, and Robert of Normandy
were originally written between 1593 and 1596; that of Cromwell did not
follow till 1607. All four reappeared in 1619, with much revision. The Mortimeriados
of 1596, much altered, became the Barons' Wars
of 1603. Drayton's second thoughts are often important, but cannot of
course be more important than the poems in which they occur. The truth
is that this enormous body of historical verse, including the Agincourt
and Miseries of Queen Margaret ( 1627), adds very little to his
reputation.
Of 'legends' and 'tragedies'
the
reader of this book has now, I hope,
heard all that he ever wishes to hear. And the historical epic is,
almost equally, a genre diseased at the heart. Drayton, like
Daniel, takes his historical poetry seriously as history: his marginal
notes are significant. At the same time he adopts all
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the rhetoric and (on
occasion) the
sensuous richness which his age
considered proper to high poetry. But such purple patches, like the
fig-leaf in sculpture, only emphasize what they are meant to hide. The
whole layout of the poem remains that of prose history. We are told
that public persons did this or that and for such and such reasons, but
we are not shown them doing it. In the Barons' Wars we are well
into the second canto before we reach anything like an epic scene with
a concrete where and when. No 'historical estimate' should deter us
from saying that this is bad, bad work: interesting only in so far as
it shows us how necessary the introductory letter to the Faerie
Queene
still was. Drayton has learned no structural lessons from all the great
narrative poets who preceded him. He has not advanced on the old
rhyming chroniclers. If you are going to be as artless as they in ordonnance
it would be better to be artless in style too. It offends less and gets
over the ground more briskly. Comparison between Drayton epic Agincourt
and his ballad on the same subject is instructive. The epic panoply
adds nothing and loses all the race and relish of the humbler poem. The
attempts to produce greatness and terror by such slaughter-house
details as 'There drops a cheeke and there falls off a nose' are
pitiable. The only good things in Agincourt occur in the
speeches; notably in Gam's rodomontade
I tell thee Woodhouse,
some in
presence stand
Dare prop the Sunne if it were falling down.
It was not till 1597, when
the
first version of England's Heroical Epistles
appeared, that Drayton's historical interests found successful poetic
expression; so successful that his revisions in the later editions were
less drastic than usual. The Epistles are of course modelled on Ovid Heroides
and we get rid of the epic chimera. They show a mingling of three
styles, the genuinely Ovidian, the Golden, and the early Metaphysical.
Thus the description of the grove in Surrey to Geraldine is
pure Golden, the passage on gold in Edward the Fourth to Mrs. Shore
faintly suggests an Elegy by Donne, and Rosamond
is so like Ovid that we catch ourselves trying to remember the Latin.
These styles, however, melt into one another without producing any
discomfort; nor are conceit and hyperbole (common to them all) so
managed as to exclude nature. Real passions at that time expressed
themselves flamboyantly. Queen Isabel's
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remark on the element of fear
in
all sorrows is true and, I think,
original; Henry II on kingship has pathos; the haggish malice of Elinor
Cobham and the chivalrous patience of her husband are well brought out;
Mortimer sustains his character of Stoic magnanimity successfully. One
great virtue of the whole collection is the sweetness and vigour of its
verse. The heroic couplet is here in its early perfection, looser than
the Augustan mode but far from the meandering of the seventeenth
century or the Romantics. It can throw up every now and then a line of
astonishing force--'And care takes vp her solitarie inne', or 'Where
the disheuel'd gastly sea-nymph sings', or (of lipstick) 'On Beauties
graue to set a crimson Hearse'.
With the exception of these Epistles
nearly all Drayton's valuable work falls outside my period: accounts of
the interesting though very uneven Polyolbion and of Nimphidia
(dear to some who do not care for 'faerie' and hateful to all who do)
must be sought elsewhere. I cannot thus surrender either the Shepherd's
Sirena, which appeared in the 1627 volume, or the Muses
Elizium
( 1630). No history of Golden poetry could possibly omit them. In these
the unfashionable old poet who had long been fighting a rear-guard
action against those who would
exile
All braue and ancient things foreuer from this Ile and proclaiming in
his solitude
Antiquitie I loue nor by the worlds despight
I cannot be remoou'd from that my dear delight,
received at last his reward
and was
allowed to conclude the Golden Age
with something (as the poetess said) 'more gold than gold'. For in
these last poems of his all that richness turns finer, more rarefied,
more quintessential, than ever before. The Shepherd's Sirena is
in one way like all Golden poetry: yet in another way there is no poem
at all like it. A hundred and twenty lines in the lulling incantatory
metre of the Phoenix and the Turtle, lines full of winter and
heartbreak, provide the base. Against this, silvery, cascading, the
song stands out with startling beauty. Its incomparable music--which
would be rather like Mr. de la Mare's if it were not so passionless and
so free from his undercurrent of misgiving--depends on taking a metre
which, of itself, is always threatening to develop into a commonplace
dactylic tumble, and then delicately, deftly,
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variously holding it back
from that
development. The charm of this song
is its inhumanity. We are nominally praising a woman, yet it is a river
as much as a woman, or neither. It is almost 'about' nothing: as near
to 'pure' poetry as the nature of language will allow. This 'purity'
continues in the best parts of the Muses Elizium.
Nothing more Golden had ever been produced. They teach nothing, assert
nothing, depict almost nothing; or, if anything, Scaliger's and
Sidney's naturam alteram. Their methods are those of Pastoral,
but the last links with real shepherd life have been severed. But not
the last images from actual nature. There is an exquisite mingling of
impossible beauties with things really observed, 'either other sweetly
gracing'. Thus on the one hand all seasons are blended so that the
fruits hang 'Some ripening, ready some to fall, Some blossom'd, some to
bloome'; the eyes of Lirope turn pebbles to diamond and tempest to
calm; it is not beyond hope
To swerue up one of
Cynthias
beames
And there to bath thee in the streames
Discouer'd in the Moone,
or that all the pearls of
all the
seas and either India should dissolve into a lake,
Thou therein bathing and I
by to
take
Pleasure to see thee clearer than the Waue.
But then, on the other hand,
the
reflection of a girl's yellow hair
upon the lily wreath that surrounds it casts a light 'like the sunnes
vpon the snow'; the 'west winde stroakes the violet leaues': an early
morning sky is 'chequerd' with 'thin clouds like scarfs of Cobweb
lawne': bees stagger homeward 'vp in hony rould More than their thighes
can hould'. The power of this Elizian poetry to transform its material
is perhaps best seen in the first 'Nimphall'. Taken in itself the
subject of that poem is scarcely tolerable. Each nymph praises the
other's beauty by preferring it to her own. The perversity of the
original Greek models survives only in the fact that this preference is
dissociated from all idea of envy or even of regret: we are left with
two inhuman, inexplicable voices uttering their passion for beauty and,
save for that, passionless. It is thus that real fairies (not the
bric-à-brac of Nimphidia) would speak if they existed.
It is
the ultimate refinement of Golden poetry, Gold 'to ayery thinnesse
beate', without weight, ready to leave the earth.
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